Flash Back .



Talash muje uski hai 
Jo khud mere chah mein gum ho 
Bachana muje usko hai 
Jo khud mere liye dooba ho
Tamana muje uski hai 
Jiske tamana mein hun 
Urna muje uske sath hai 
Mere liye ho jiske uran 
Chalna muje use ke sath hai 
Jiske manzil mein hun 
Marna muje uske liye hai 
Jo na marne de muje kabhi 




This I wrote this long time ago . mostly people find Urdu poetry cheap and love sick and what not . I LOVE Urdu poetry a lot . I think everything is beautifully expressed in it . very deep and passionate be it any topic . ( i am not saying this poem of mine is in any way talking in general about classy urdu poetry ) :l .




P.S I am posting this because acetyl choline, abeer and aneeqa said so :) 
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7 comments:

  1. Furree KattFebruary 18, 2011 at 11:14 PM

    WOW.

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  2. AnonymousFebruary 19, 2011 at 12:30 AM

    Urdu poetry is great , and thats a nice piece you've written .
    Hats off.

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  3. Doodhpati February 19, 2011 at 8:03 AM

    thank you guys .

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  4. AcetylCholineFebruary 19, 2011 at 2:30 PM

    I love it. If this is what you wrote a long time back then what you can come up with now must be amazing. =) Keep writing.

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  5. SidrahFebruary 20, 2011 at 3:07 PM

    hey, you're really good =)
    and urdu poetry isn't cheap.. I find it deep and interesting.

    Keep writing (and posting) more =)

    <3

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  6. AnonymousFebruary 25, 2011 at 9:58 PM

    I love it.
    Kya zauq hay.

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  7. AabiFebruary 27, 2011 at 7:43 PM

    waaaah waaah waaah waaah!
    mujjhe bhi isi ki talaash hai! :D
    seriously yaar. write more ur awesome at this!

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